~Poetry: In the distance


In the distance,

mountains loom,

like sentinels.


Here is my  version of Lia Poetic Form-  (that doesn’t rhyme):  

A Lia is a nine-line poem or stanza that uses an “a” and “b” rhyme following this pattern: aabaabaab.  

low hanging clouds

against blue sky



far in the distance

looming mountains 



sentinel watching

invokes feeling



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